tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5830451180306653353.post8212225462069940290..comments2023-06-03T23:46:24.970+12:00Comments on Texas: SwimmingPES Blog Gmailhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10430434432980030044noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5830451180306653353.post-19443350303060016902012-05-18T10:38:42.684+12:002012-05-18T10:38:42.684+12:00Hi Texas Was it fun when we went swimming by the w...Hi Texas Was it fun when we went swimming by the way what was your favorite part.Lukis Lhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10648548948433655290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5830451180306653353.post-57678683085706511122012-05-09T15:43:05.991+12:002012-05-09T15:43:05.991+12:00This is a good piece of writing Texas well done.
...This is a good piece of writing Texas well done. <br /><br />I am pleased to see you starting your sentences in different ways like 'waiting', 'swimming' and 'gracefully'. It is a lot more interesting isn't it.<br /><br />Now you have set the standard for next time. Keep it up.Mr Chris Markshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14912841501575471267noreply@blogger.com