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Simile & Metaphor

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P.E

Every day we have P.E after morning tea but this time we had P.E after lunch. We were challenging room twenty one,Guess what game we were playing we are going to play lightning ball,How to play,if the ball falls down it will be soccer and if you catch the ball the game will turn into handball.

We started to play and our goalie was Tana,He kicked the soccer ball so high that no one catches it. running and kick the ball people were chasing me so i kicked  the ball up so someone can catch it and then the game will turn into handball.

Mr barks Said” bring it in guys” so He meant we had to get ready to go to class.

We got there and then the bell rang and we all went home.

Reading Task

Stephen Donald, the man who was called up to play in the Rugby World Cup, is going to have his story told in a new television film.

he was initially the All Blacks 4th choice Number 10, but was called after injuries struck down Dan Carter, Colin Slade.
Donald took the field in a jersey several sizes too small for him, and calmly slotted the winning penalty goal in the 45th minute.
The project is still awaiting funding from New Zealand On Air but has the blessing of the New Zealand Rugby Union.

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Show not tell

On a Yellow sunny day I was so sweaty and I could not stand the heat. Jogging with A boiling heat I thought  my face was dripping tears. Finally I got Under a nice and refreshing tree, it was like i'm in a cold pool.

Texas Writing

One cold day, Pt england school went to the reserve to have a picnic. We got got there and suddenly i forgot to bring my water bottle so i just waited for my mum to come. Mr Burt our principal said some things and then we had to walk to the far end to put our bags there,i asked Mrs Nua if she wanted a lolly and said”Yes .

Me and my friends eat morning tea before we go to play. I said” Jacob should we go skim some rocks” and he said “yes”. Walking to the sand we couldn’t hardly find any rocks so we went to make something out of clay. It was hard to make some thing because it took too long.

I saw my mum with my water bottle and my new jacket she bought. I went over to get it and go back to play,i went to play softball and i was batting first,I hitted the ball with the bat and i ran to base three.

Once the batter battered i got a home run and had a rest because i was running like a tiger.I saw team 5 getting ready to swim but i wasn’t i just had a rest and ate my lunch.I looked at my drink bottle it had a flavour of lemon and lime,I just noticed my foot was bleeding and i know why i was the cracked glass just sitting there i was time to go so we packed up and went to our teacher.

We were on our way back to class,




This morning we all completed our first writing sample for 2013.I have posted it just as I wrote it in the 40 minutes we were given, so that throughout this year I will be able to look back and reflect on the progress I have made in my writing ,I will post my goals from this soon